Biting Tongues: A Sonnet for the First Amendment
To speak of dark and wet and secret things,
gives rise to petered peckers and tapped phones.
Whether entwining limbs or skewering kings,
rough words must not be ground dull under stone.
Well-aimed barbs pierce the breast and bleed
crimson truths that pinch the loins and rend hearts.
The fool for love of country we dire need
not to whisper but to roar the hard parts.
To soak dry linen from an unstoppered flask,
let freedoms surface beneath still moist sheets.
Between the tickles, bites and who licks last
love and liberty reign when minds, not heads meet.
Salute the jester with middle finger extended,
and grasp the unknown as was first intended.
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18 Comments:
The poem in itself has a sententious quality where it lives its breath and speech. So many powerful lines, also.
And I love the poetry readings. They add such character. They rock. I should try it sometime.
Ô¿Ô: Hmmm. Sententious can mean either pithy or pompous. As I understand it. I'll stick with the former. And thank you. Glad you enjoyed your visit!
And yes you should record! Especially "Nov. 21." That ones a lollapalooza poem and meant to be heard and amplified!
If you're not familiar with ODEO web recordings you should check it out. It's free and painless. You can have your stuff recorded in less than 5 minutes--maybe 7 once you register. They don't bug you any further solicitation either. Just click on the "powered by" logo.
Oops. I actually meant 'sentient,' in that the soul of the poem seems to be contained within itself... if that makes sense.
And thanks for the tip on the site! I'll defintely check it out.
I like the diversity of your poems and the intellectual Pzazz!This piece is heady in many ways...
Great to hear your voice. I think you were one of the ones who inspired me to do voice posts again. Thx!
Oh I agree. I use ODEO also, but didn't figure out how to get a player on my site. Still, the audio link works as long as the visitor has "windows media player" or some form of software to hear me with. Glad you encouraged Transient Revelation above. I ADORE that poem of his! :D
m00n: It is so lovely to wake up to your comments. And flattering to be a wee bit of inspiration. This will put a little zest in my morning run today!
Ô¿Ô: Ah sentient...thank you kind sir. I'd like to think that's what a sonnet always aspires to be.
Hi scheherazade, great sonnet, love the closing couplet. You have a lovely voice with a smooth delivery. I think people prefer guilt-free complacency, doing something would require a conscience. Take care,
Bob
Wonderful piece! Your skill in word choice sparkles in the sonnet form. I especially like the sharp sounds in the lines "Well-aimed barbs pierce the breast and bleed / crimson truths that pinch the loins and rend hearts." And the enjambment of "bleed / crimson truths" holds a lot of energy that gets put into "crimson truths," really making that image (and what it stands for) leap out.
Bob: so glad that you liked this; in these days, I was actually torn between writing a sonnet or a eulogy.
Mike: i am pleased that this one "sparkled" for you; don't know that I'll stick with the sonnet form, but I'll definitely flirt with her on occasion; your praise was uplifting (btw, I didn't leave a note on your latest post--about doing things differently to effect radical change--escaping routine--but I did put it into practice starting today--and it's working!)
Magnificent... I cannot find your email if you have one listed, so I will ask you here. I am interested in having you guest post on my blog Poetic Justice (Don't burn the flag. Wash it!)...
If you are interested you may contact me via the blog at the link thepoetryman username above.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.
If you choose not to guest post I will understand completely, and whether you do or not, you are now a permanent fixture on my Echoing Voices links!
Thank you.
Peace.
Poetry Man: I'd be honored! Thank you for asking. I visit your site frequently and admire both your activism and aesthetic.
If you see this my email is grlscoutfinch at yahoo dot com. (I have problems with the pop up system).
This poem keeps getting better :-)
Hello Glenn! Of course, YOU would remember. Only you. That was moooonths ago. Yes, it is a timely piece and still molting.
You were missed. (Oh, and don't worry about checking out CK; I know you're busy; And it's not really very good; really; this I know)
I bow to the wonders
I feel like a fly in the company of butterflies...
Scheherazade,
Your posted my friend... :>)
Ozy: What is this gibberish? If anything, you are a monarch!
PM: Oooooh! Can't wait to see it!
I like this poem so much I just listened to your crisp voice again. :)
It's ingenious the way you (seemingly) rhyme with ease and juxtapose harsh reality with intellectual truths of the planes on which people should meet.
In just a few words, so much is said with your head and heart. Bravo (again!)
silverm00n: you become more like moonshine to me. getting me drunk off your praises.
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